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[beta] DSKSWDYHMS? - Chapter 1
Bob Schroeck Offline
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#5
08-03-2009, 02:25 AM
Nicely done -- looks like all the brainstorming worked out quite well. One thing, though, beyond the stuff other folks have noted:
Quote:Do a little footwork next time."
I think you mean legwork here.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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