Rob: nice catch on the honorific and the age discrepancy. I'll fix those. As for the giggles, oh yes, those thoughts definitely ran through my head. Maybe
I can use it for omake material.
Yesilmavi: It's a typoe. Some of these are compounded by the fact that I got more than one draft lying around and sometimes I'll find myself working on
an old draft and making corrections I meant to make on the most recent one. (^_^
ordnance11: Good call. Something about that area wasn't quite ringing true to me and you just found it for me. Thanks! BTW: was that battle actually filmed
by the camera crew in the anime? Thanks for the kudos on Rei and Zeke's interactions. I was a afraid that it would be taken as being way over-the-top, as
Rei is normally supposed to be (somewhat) stoic.
Bob: Thanks, I'll correct that. Glad there's a veteran like you around to catch little details like that. Thanks for the kudos, too! (^_^)
Coming up next! The whirlwind picks up as Zeke comes to terms with the Senshi's existence, the Senshi coming to terms with having 'civilian'
assistance, and Rei coming to terms with Zeke (or at least trying to).
ETA: Oh, and the 'production' copy should pop up on FF.net sometime later in the week, maybe even tonight. Or I might even ask Bob to host it -
depends on if I decide I want HTML niftiness or not... One thing's for sure, my brothers are going to go nuts when they see this - they're my biggest
fans so far. (^_^
I can use it for omake material.
Yesilmavi: It's a typoe. Some of these are compounded by the fact that I got more than one draft lying around and sometimes I'll find myself working on
an old draft and making corrections I meant to make on the most recent one. (^_^
ordnance11: Good call. Something about that area wasn't quite ringing true to me and you just found it for me. Thanks! BTW: was that battle actually filmed
by the camera crew in the anime? Thanks for the kudos on Rei and Zeke's interactions. I was a afraid that it would be taken as being way over-the-top, as
Rei is normally supposed to be (somewhat) stoic.
Bob: Thanks, I'll correct that. Glad there's a veteran like you around to catch little details like that. Thanks for the kudos, too! (^_^)
Coming up next! The whirlwind picks up as Zeke comes to terms with the Senshi's existence, the Senshi coming to terms with having 'civilian'
assistance, and Rei coming to terms with Zeke (or at least trying to).
ETA: Oh, and the 'production' copy should pop up on FF.net sometime later in the week, maybe even tonight. Or I might even ask Bob to host it -
depends on if I decide I want HTML niftiness or not... One thing's for sure, my brothers are going to go nuts when they see this - they're my biggest
fans so far. (^_^