I liked the idea, and I thought that the implementation was interesting and different enough to merit reading further. As for writing quality, I'm a bit
more generous on that than I used to be, after finding several authors with very primitive writing skills yet good story ideas and plots. I'm inclined to
give the benefit of the doubt to someone who doesn't quite seem to know what they're doing, more than I used to at least.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
more generous on that than I used to be, after finding several authors with very primitive writing skills yet good story ideas and plots. I'm inclined to
give the benefit of the doubt to someone who doesn't quite seem to know what they're doing, more than I used to at least.
-- Bob
---------
Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.