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[draft] DSKSWDYHMS? - Chapter 2
Necratoid
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09-08-2009, 07:44 PM
You do realize that Allan is sooo going to decide that Kubiac is Zeke's Cardian equivalent at this point? That and between being called the 'Dark
Knight' and having 'wonderful toys' Zeke is doomed to be called Batman at some point. Couple of subtle bits of foreshadowing I liked. All in all
a fun and productive episode... though I'd have a secondary indicator of perspective and scene changes... most as FF.net is infamous for sicing bizarre
formatting issues on the world.
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