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Damascus (A:TLA)
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#23
11-06-2009, 07:10 PM
Toph is starting to acquire her own gang of protectors. Interesting group... and oddly enough, mostly non-benders as opposed to Aang's group in canon.

Oh, and this line seems weird: "Well it's a good job that I'm on a beach then."

Maybe you should change it to "good thing"?
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Damascus (A:TLA) - by drakensis - 11-01-2009, 10:22 PM
Wo-ho!! - by Jonas - 11-02-2009, 12:22 AM
[No subject] - by katreus - 11-02-2009, 12:59 AM
[No subject] - by werehawk - 11-02-2009, 02:36 AM
[No subject] - by drakensis - 11-02-2009, 10:27 AM
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[No subject] - by Valles - 11-02-2009, 08:49 PM
[No subject] - by drakensis - 11-03-2009, 12:30 PM
[No subject] - by katreus - 11-03-2009, 02:59 PM
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[No subject] - by s3yang - 11-05-2009, 07:56 PM
[No subject] - by drakensis - 11-06-2009, 06:32 PM
[No subject] - by katreus - 11-06-2009, 07:10 PM
[No subject] - by drakensis - 11-07-2009, 05:14 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 11-07-2009, 06:44 PM
[No subject] - by katreus - 11-07-2009, 09:53 PM
[No subject] - by drakensis - 11-08-2009, 12:14 AM
[No subject] - by katreus - 11-08-2009, 01:47 PM
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