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WengFook
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03-27-2008, 03:55 AM

Very interesting prologue, even better first chapter [Image: smile.gif]

I think you've really gotten the character voices down perfectly [Image: smile.gif]

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Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Zojojojo - 02-28-2008, 02:10 AM

Carried over from Thread 4... - by Bob Schroeck - 02-28-2008, 09:21 PM

Re: Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Bob Schroeck - 02-28-2008, 09:25 PM

Update - by TheTwisted1 - 03-01-2008, 04:10 AM

[No subject] - by Norgarth - 03-01-2008, 09:21 AM

[No subject] - by sweno - 03-01-2008, 11:51 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-01-2008, 11:56 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-02-2008, 09:28 AM

[No subject] - by Norgarth - 03-02-2008, 07:36 PM

Update - by Hotpoint - 03-02-2008, 09:10 PM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-03-2008, 12:39 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-03-2008, 08:02 AM

Re: Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Jinx999 - 03-03-2008, 10:35 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-03-2008, 10:55 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-04-2008, 09:55 PM

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[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-05-2008, 09:44 PM

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[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-07-2008, 01:31 AM

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[No subject] - by Xenoproctologist - 03-07-2008, 09:25 AM

[No subject] - by kestrel404 - 03-07-2008, 07:01 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-08-2008, 01:32 AM

[No subject] - by TheTwisted1 - 03-08-2008, 12:18 PM

[No subject] - by Norgarth - 03-08-2008, 09:54 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-08-2008, 11:03 PM

[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 03-09-2008, 02:57 AM

[No subject] - by Norgarth - 03-09-2008, 06:04 AM

Update - by Hotpoint - 03-09-2008, 08:23 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-10-2008, 12:34 AM

[No subject] - by LilFluff - 03-10-2008, 03:30 AM

[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 03-10-2008, 01:04 PM

[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 03-10-2008, 06:55 PM

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[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-16-2008, 05:37 AM

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[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 03-21-2008, 03:20 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-22-2008, 06:12 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-23-2008, 04:53 AM

Update - by Hotpoint - 03-24-2008, 12:44 AM

Endless Waltz updated - by werehawk - 03-24-2008, 03:00 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-24-2008, 05:33 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-25-2008, 05:53 AM

[No subject] - by Norgarth - 03-25-2008, 05:49 PM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-25-2008, 08:45 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-26-2008, 03:24 AM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-26-2008, 04:05 PM

Holding one's Destiny... 'Hidden Road'? - by K sai - 03-27-2008, 02:19 AM

[No subject] - by Aleh - 03-27-2008, 03:25 AM

[No subject] - by WengFook - 03-27-2008, 03:55 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-27-2008, 04:58 AM

Re: Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Jinx999 - 03-27-2008, 09:33 AM

[No subject] - by sweno - 03-27-2008, 09:53 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-27-2008, 09:50 PM

[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 03-27-2008, 10:42 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-28-2008, 07:01 AM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-28-2008, 10:23 PM

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[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-29-2008, 05:29 AM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-29-2008, 08:55 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-30-2008, 02:49 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-30-2008, 05:45 AM

[No subject] - by WengFook - 03-30-2008, 07:54 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 03-31-2008, 04:18 AM

Re: Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Jinx999 - 03-31-2008, 09:15 AM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-31-2008, 06:27 PM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 03-31-2008, 07:34 PM

[No subject] - by Morganite - 04-01-2008, 07:15 AM

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[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 04-01-2008, 01:48 PM

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[No subject] - by Zojojojo - 04-04-2008, 04:21 PM

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[No subject] - by drakensis - 04-06-2008, 02:03 PM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 04-06-2008, 02:50 PM

Update - by Hotpoint - 04-06-2008, 08:27 PM

[No subject] - by Norgarth - 04-06-2008, 09:23 PM

more Regrets - by Zojojojo - 04-07-2008, 04:23 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-07-2008, 07:24 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-08-2008, 06:24 AM

Team 8 - by Shepherd - 04-08-2008, 07:54 AM

[No subject] - by sweno - 04-08-2008, 09:31 AM

Naruto updates - by Zojojojo - 04-08-2008, 07:35 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-09-2008, 10:30 PM

[No subject] - by sweno - 04-10-2008, 11:13 AM

[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 04-10-2008, 01:50 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-10-2008, 08:49 PM

The Consequences Of Not Being Polite has updated today - by hmelton - 04-11-2008, 02:29 AM

new story from amber penglass - by DreadnaughtVV - 04-11-2008, 03:32 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-11-2008, 05:27 PM

[No subject] - by Zojojojo - 04-11-2008, 08:27 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-12-2008, 06:10 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-12-2008, 06:47 PM

[No subject] - by Xenoproctologist - 04-13-2008, 01:24 AM

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[No subject] - by Zojojojo - 04-15-2008, 06:00 PM

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[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-16-2008, 12:31 AM

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[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 04-16-2008, 09:14 AM

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[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 04-17-2008, 03:32 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-18-2008, 03:51 AM

Getting a few wires crossed... - by K sai - 04-18-2008, 05:27 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-19-2008, 05:54 AM

[No subject] - by Jinx999 - 04-19-2008, 12:37 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-19-2008, 09:16 PM

Re: Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Jinx999 - 04-20-2008, 12:06 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-20-2008, 01:16 AM

Update - by Hotpoint - 04-20-2008, 07:21 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-20-2008, 09:31 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-22-2008, 05:37 AM

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[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 04-24-2008, 04:18 AM

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Re: Updates Thread 5: The Return of the Revenge From Outer Space - by Jinx999 - 04-24-2008, 08:42 AM

[No subject] - by sweno - 04-24-2008, 08:44 AM

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[No subject] - by K sai - 04-25-2008, 12:16 PM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-26-2008, 12:21 AM

A few updates... - by werehawk - 04-26-2008, 05:26 AM

[No subject] - by Shepherd - 04-26-2008, 08:34 PM

[No subject] - by yesilmavi - 04-26-2008, 08:36 PM

[No subject] - by K sai - 04-27-2008, 12:14 PM

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Re: The trainwreck of Skysaber - by Deadpan29 - 04-30-2008, 10:30 PM

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On A Clear Day - by gubaba - 05-03-2008, 09:30 AM

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Update - by Hotpoint - 05-05-2008, 09:17 PM

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