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[draft] DSKSWDYHMS? - Chapter 3
Bob Schroeck Offline
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12-07-2009, 06:54 PM
Agreed, this is looking very good. Numerous spelling errors, as you anticipated, and Rob has already pointed out the only major problem in the actual writing.
But still very good. I like the development with Rei in this segment quite a bit.
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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[No subject] - by robkelk - 12-07-2009, 06:50 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 12-07-2009, 06:54 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-08-2009, 06:35 AM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 12-08-2009, 01:11 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-08-2009, 04:27 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 12-08-2009, 09:07 PM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 12-08-2009, 10:30 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-09-2009, 02:18 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 12-09-2009, 05:17 PM
Just the thing - by ordnance11 - 12-10-2009, 07:16 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-10-2009, 06:44 PM
[No subject] - by ordnance11 - 12-10-2009, 06:48 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 12-11-2009, 04:30 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-11-2009, 11:52 AM
[No subject] - by Valles - 12-11-2009, 01:19 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-11-2009, 02:11 PM
[No subject] - by Valles - 12-11-2009, 02:54 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 12-11-2009, 04:48 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-11-2009, 05:23 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 12-11-2009, 07:50 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 12-12-2009, 04:11 AM
[No subject] - by ordnance11 - 12-12-2009, 04:29 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 12-14-2009, 05:56 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-14-2009, 02:20 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 12-14-2009, 04:54 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 12-14-2009, 05:34 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-15-2009, 01:38 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 12-15-2009, 05:01 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 12-15-2009, 06:51 PM

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