" a converted devil that is trying real hard to follow orders and not screw up"
Wait, what?
Thats not how I remember that arc at all.
"Holy Bell" is Belldandy's angel, and is as much of a cipher as most of Belldandy's past.
"Tsukai" was the "second", and the fact that Belldandy couldn't support the both of them was a pretty large plot element.
The rest of your stuff is almost as bad. I had like 4 more paragraphs typed up but I just deleted them. Instead, I am just going to go with Valles and just go "meh"
Wait, what?
Thats not how I remember that arc at all.
"Holy Bell" is Belldandy's angel, and is as much of a cipher as most of Belldandy's past.
"Tsukai" was the "second", and the fact that Belldandy couldn't support the both of them was a pretty large plot element.
The rest of your stuff is almost as bad. I had like 4 more paragraphs typed up but I just deleted them. Instead, I am just going to go with Valles and just go "meh"