Thanks mate, but it's almost done.
I'm trying to keep Noriko from being a one-whine pony. She tries to get her act together and will start to try deliberately affect the world around her as she gets more confident in herself. At the end of the latest part, she's worked out her big issue for the most part, and is generally in a good place. Of course, being Evangelion that won't last.... especially when she accidentally makes things worse in one event, damn near gets killed in the next, repeats the mistake made by Asuka, and finds out exactly what happened to her.
And I'm aiming towards a bit of a bittersweet ending for this. To give you an idea of how... the first version of the story had spent the entire thing building up to an awesome battle with Noriko and Asuka against the MPEva's.... only for Noriko to get shot in the back by the JSSDF and bleed out in a corridor in front of Shinji before ever making it to her Eva. She lasted long enough to accept instrumentality as a happy place for her, and decided it was okay to stay there.
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I'm trying to keep Noriko from being a one-whine pony. She tries to get her act together and will start to try deliberately affect the world around her as she gets more confident in herself. At the end of the latest part, she's worked out her big issue for the most part, and is generally in a good place. Of course, being Evangelion that won't last.... especially when she accidentally makes things worse in one event, damn near gets killed in the next, repeats the mistake made by Asuka, and finds out exactly what happened to her.
And I'm aiming towards a bit of a bittersweet ending for this. To give you an idea of how... the first version of the story had spent the entire thing building up to an awesome battle with Noriko and Asuka against the MPEva's.... only for Noriko to get shot in the back by the JSSDF and bleed out in a corridor in front of Shinji before ever making it to her Eva. She lasted long enough to accept instrumentality as a happy place for her, and decided it was okay to stay there.
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?