Eep?... O.o
For something that is little more than a drabble, that is some EPIC high octane nightmare fuel right there!
Nicely done.
EDIT: BTW - I hope you don't mind, but I re-posted your story to the Mass Effect Community LJ page. I mentioned that they might come here and praise it. But oops! Forgot this board requires registration. And it's not really for "casual anonymous" postings. Anyway - responses over there so far are positive, and they asked if you could go take a bow or two over -there-? ^_^
For something that is little more than a drabble, that is some EPIC high octane nightmare fuel right there!
Nicely done.
EDIT: BTW - I hope you don't mind, but I re-posted your story to the Mass Effect Community LJ page. I mentioned that they might come here and praise it. But oops! Forgot this board requires registration. And it's not really for "casual anonymous" postings. Anyway - responses over there so far are positive, and they asked if you could go take a bow or two over -there-? ^_^