Okay, this one's been given it's final polish, and thank you BA, Hoagie, and Skye for suggesting improvements that were implemented, and now it's at it's final home.
If anyone else wants to give this a perusal, and let me know what you think, I would be grateful.
http://www.ficwad.com/story/145509
-W
Per Vino ad AstraFalling out of aeroplanes and hiding out in holes
Waiting for the sunset to come, people going home
Jump out from behind them and shoot them in the head
Now everybody dancing the dance of the dead
If anyone else wants to give this a perusal, and let me know what you think, I would be grateful.
http://www.ficwad.com/story/145509
-W
Per Vino ad AstraFalling out of aeroplanes and hiding out in holes
Waiting for the sunset to come, people going home
Jump out from behind them and shoot them in the head
Now everybody dancing the dance of the dead