http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-23886/Me ... y+Ties.htm]Family Ties. Rupert Giles is called back to England when his sister and her husband die in an auto accident, leaving in his care and custody a 14-year-old niece he's never met -- Hermione Granger. (Looks like it takes place during S4 of Buffy.)
This one's only got three chapters so far, all posted on the same day, and the story's barely begun, but it looks like it has potential. The extant material is technically excellent (except for three or four spelling errors of the kind a spellchecker won't catch), the author's got a good ear for voice and for composition, and he's already laying groundwork with some well-crafted original supporting characters. I just hope that after this spurt of creativity the author keeps going.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
This one's only got three chapters so far, all posted on the same day, and the story's barely begun, but it looks like it has potential. The extant material is technically excellent (except for three or four spelling errors of the kind a spellchecker won't catch), the author's got a good ear for voice and for composition, and he's already laying groundwork with some well-crafted original supporting characters. I just hope that after this spurt of creativity the author keeps going.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.