Jinx999 Wrote:It seems well written so far - but it's difficult to get a coherent background when you mix Harry Potter with a different magic series (unless you go down the "Wizarding World are all morons" route) and we haven't had the characters meet yet - which is always difficult to handle
they are all morons, at least in regards to non-wizarding crap.... when the head of the department dealing with "people futzing with non-wizarding crap" can't even get the words "telephone" and "electricity" right, it doesn't speak well of their collective intelligence in this regard... that said, it's shaping up well so far
-Z, Post-reader at Medium
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