sweno Wrote:It's well written, but I think suffering from having a perfect super-Harry. He's not making mistakes, being smooth and wise and powerful and picking up incredibly useful and powerful magic devices.Quote: potter/dresden. just starting. when potter is 7 he starts remembering another life in dreams.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6708953/1/School_Spirit
I'm digging this. The author has the dresden voice down pat (even though it's not strictly dresden). It also has done a good job of dealing with the different nature of magic between the two sources.
It wouldn't be Harry Dresden without screw ups, social disaster and bittersweet endings.