Zojojojo Wrote:This is also a Harry with both Dream and Death of the Endless on his side, remember. With allies like those, I fully expect this to be Super-Harry.Quote:It's well written, but I think suffering from having a perfect super-Harry. He's not making mistakes, being smooth and wise and powerful and picking up incredibly useful and powerful magic devices.
It wouldn't be Harry Dresden without screw ups, social disaster and bittersweet endings.
harry dresden is, as mentioned in the story, usually the underdog... right now, harry is a 20-something dealing with the problems of an 11 year old... i fully expect him to, eventually, try to waltz his way through a problem only to find out it's a little bigger than he expected.... at least, i hope that happens
