[RFC][dskswdyhms] Fixing Zeke (Pinging anyone who hated him before)

[paladindythe]

I like what you've done. The biggest whole is that his quotes (and merely being a protagonist to some extent) imply a Determinator aspect, but there's no real history supporting it. Why does Zeke refuse to give in, when things get tough? You imply that it's because of the high standards to which he holds himself. If that's the case, then you may want to draw up a personal code of ethics for him. If nothing else, he could base it off of Character Strength and Virtues. You can get a lot of mileage when he fails to meet his own standards. You also should play up his abrasiveness, it was seriously lacking in his conduct before. It needs to cost him something, at least temporarily.