That sounds pretty good. A few questions though:
1) Would this cousin just be trying to show Zeke up, to defeat and maybe kill Zeke, or somehow steal Zeke's Avatar-ness?
2) Are there any other avatars running around? (Are the Senshi avatar's of the gods they are named for?)
3) What sort of powers does the cousin get out of the deal? Zeke has the gadgeteer thing, and a few other powers I can't quite recall at the moment.
4) How fast is this cousin getting corrupted? It seems pretty quick, based on the summary, but if he showed up in story ot confront Zeke right after he made the contract, and a few more times as he is falling, that would be interesting. It would certainly give Zeke something else to worry about,especially if he kept defeating his cousin whenever he shows up, but it only makes things worse.
Edit:
Maybe a monster/victim of the week could ping whatever "damned soul" sense the cousin has, when he first shows up in story? Or maybe Dark Lady, if he shows up while Chibiusa is corrupted?
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Stand between the Silver Crystal and the Golden Sea.
"Youngsters these days just have no appreciation for the magnificence of the legendary cucumber." --Krityan Elder, Tales of Vesperia.
1) Would this cousin just be trying to show Zeke up, to defeat and maybe kill Zeke, or somehow steal Zeke's Avatar-ness?
2) Are there any other avatars running around? (Are the Senshi avatar's of the gods they are named for?)
3) What sort of powers does the cousin get out of the deal? Zeke has the gadgeteer thing, and a few other powers I can't quite recall at the moment.
4) How fast is this cousin getting corrupted? It seems pretty quick, based on the summary, but if he showed up in story ot confront Zeke right after he made the contract, and a few more times as he is falling, that would be interesting. It would certainly give Zeke something else to worry about,especially if he kept defeating his cousin whenever he shows up, but it only makes things worse.
Edit:
Maybe a monster/victim of the week could ping whatever "damned soul" sense the cousin has, when he first shows up in story? Or maybe Dark Lady, if he shows up while Chibiusa is corrupted?
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Stand between the Silver Crystal and the Golden Sea.
"Youngsters these days just have no appreciation for the magnificence of the legendary cucumber." --Krityan Elder, Tales of Vesperia.