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MSLN/EH: Hazardous Lyrics
 
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I agree with Robkelk -- the TSAB crew is a much more suitable arrangement to get Ifurita's recharge taken care of. They're going to arrive on the scene anyway, and having them meet up with Nanoha's family and confirm part of Ifurita's story will be a help.

And as said, don't introduce a crossover unless you mean to make it a continuing part of the story, or it's just a throwaway offscreen reference. Unless you plan for the Negima elements to play a major role later in the story this is completely unnecessary.

Even if you do want them to turn up later, it's better to get the TSAB introduced since readers will be expecting them.

If you want to drop a hint foreshadowing a later Negima crossover element, have one of the 'back home at the Midori-ya' segments include the family getting a letter inviting Nanoha to attend Mahora Academy, or something like that... just a minor, low-key introduction of the element.
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MSLN/EH: Hazardous Lyrics - by ClassicDrogn - 02-16-2011, 02:21 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 02-16-2011, 03:54 AM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 02-16-2011, 05:59 PM
[No subject] - by Deadpan29 - 02-17-2011, 08:04 PM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 02-17-2011, 10:15 PM
[No subject] - by Deadpan29 - 02-18-2011, 01:05 AM
[No subject] - by SCM Writer of 2814 - 02-18-2011, 04:02 AM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 02-18-2011, 07:25 PM
[No subject] - by Deadpan29 - 02-21-2011, 06:47 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 02-26-2011, 12:50 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 02-26-2011, 03:12 AM
[No subject] - by SCM Writer of 2814 - 02-26-2011, 05:10 AM
[No subject] - by Guilherme Loureiro - 02-26-2011, 12:53 PM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 03-02-2011, 10:02 PM
[No subject] - by Deadpan29 - 03-03-2011, 12:47 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 03-03-2011, 04:43 AM
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