Thanks to everyone for you assistance on this. I think I'm over the conceptual hump on this, and the writing is flowing more easily as I proceed. I'm still a little worried that I've got too many talking heads and not enough attention-grabbing hooks in what I've got, but we'll see what it looks like when I'm done.
Of course, on the other hand, my plans for shorter, more frequent chapters is not off to a good start, since what was supposed to be a quick recap is currently comfortably over 3000 words, less than halfway done, and outlined to contain a substantial plot development.
Aaron Nowack
Of course, on the other hand, my plans for shorter, more frequent chapters is not off to a good start, since what was supposed to be a quick recap is currently comfortably over 3000 words, less than halfway done, and outlined to contain a substantial plot development.
Aaron Nowack