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Dead Bang chapter 7

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05-04-2011, 06:22 PM

Okay. Ch. 7 is first-pass complete. Just tidying it up and looking for anything that looks weak. This one is the longest yet, about 30k larger than the last one.
Many thanks to Bob for graciously agreeing to proofread the chapter. Having a second set of eyes on the document is much appreciated! Smile

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Dead Bang chapter 7 - by Dragonflight - 05-02-2011, 11:23 PM

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