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Dead Bang chapter 7
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If you're soliciting ideas for a name, I vote for either "Jet" (after the owner of the Bebop and Spike's partner-in-crime from Cowboy Bebop), or something double-take-inducing like "Melvin" or "Benny" (the latter after the… peculiar male lead in the movie Benny and Joon).
If you're asking for general criticism, then all I can do is echo Sweno on all points. |
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Dead Bang chapter 7 - by Dragonflight - 05-02-2011, 11:23 PM
[No subject] - by Glidergun - 05-03-2011, 12:07 AM
[No subject] - by HoagieOfDoom - 05-03-2011, 12:39 AM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 05-03-2011, 12:51 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-03-2011, 02:02 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-03-2011, 02:56 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-03-2011, 03:17 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-03-2011, 03:20 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-03-2011, 03:23 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-03-2011, 03:25 AM
[No subject] - by HoagieOfDoom - 05-03-2011, 04:43 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-03-2011, 06:09 AM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 05-03-2011, 11:22 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-04-2011, 05:35 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-04-2011, 03:14 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-04-2011, 03:32 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-04-2011, 03:33 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-04-2011, 03:51 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-04-2011, 06:22 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-04-2011, 11:18 PM
[No subject] - by sweno - 05-04-2011, 11:36 PM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 05-05-2011, 01:44 AM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 05-05-2011, 04:42 AM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 05-05-2011, 07:52 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-05-2011, 09:18 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 05-05-2011, 02:12 PM
[No subject] - by Rod.H - 05-05-2011, 02:54 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-05-2011, 05:48 PM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 05-06-2011, 06:40 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-06-2011, 07:20 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 05-06-2011, 03:20 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-07-2011, 06:10 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 05-07-2011, 07:26 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-07-2011, 04:16 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-07-2011, 06:50 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-08-2011, 03:57 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-09-2011, 03:40 AM
[No subject] - by Ebony - 05-09-2011, 05:38 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-09-2011, 07:50 PM
[No subject] - by sweno - 05-09-2011, 10:54 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-09-2011, 11:41 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 05-10-2011, 01:00 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-10-2011, 02:41 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-10-2011, 03:22 AM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 05-10-2011, 04:26 AM
[No subject] - by Epsilon - 05-10-2011, 06:15 AM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 05-10-2011, 06:27 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-10-2011, 07:38 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-10-2011, 07:43 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-10-2011, 07:57 AM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 05-10-2011, 04:21 PM
[No subject] - by Glidergun - 05-10-2011, 09:53 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-10-2011, 10:38 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-11-2011, 09:56 AM
[No subject] - by s3yang - 05-11-2011, 07:12 PM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 05-11-2011, 07:38 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-11-2011, 10:25 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-12-2011, 01:11 AM
[No subject] - by happerry - 05-12-2011, 04:15 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-12-2011, 11:42 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-13-2011, 01:44 AM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 05-13-2011, 07:24 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-13-2011, 03:24 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-13-2011, 06:55 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 05-13-2011, 07:34 PM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 05-13-2011, 10:02 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-13-2011, 11:08 PM
[No subject] - by Glidergun - 05-13-2011, 11:54 PM
[No subject] - by Ebony - 05-14-2011, 12:27 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-14-2011, 01:11 AM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-14-2011, 01:30 AM
[No subject] - by Glidergun - 05-14-2011, 01:38 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 05-14-2011, 02:31 AM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-14-2011, 03:27 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-14-2011, 06:23 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-14-2011, 07:11 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-14-2011, 08:05 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-14-2011, 10:01 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-15-2011, 08:20 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-15-2011, 08:31 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-15-2011, 09:14 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-16-2011, 04:03 AM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 05-16-2011, 06:40 AM
[No subject] - by itsune9tl - 05-16-2011, 08:59 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-16-2011, 10:55 PM
[No subject] - by Ebony - 05-16-2011, 11:59 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-17-2011, 12:33 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 05-17-2011, 12:45 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-17-2011, 05:21 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-18-2011, 04:40 AM
[No subject] - by Ebony - 05-18-2011, 03:25 PM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 05-18-2011, 11:42 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-24-2011, 06:53 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-24-2011, 07:17 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-25-2011, 04:08 AM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 05-25-2011, 10:43 PM
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[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-26-2011, 06:00 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-26-2011, 08:20 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-26-2011, 08:59 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-29-2011, 04:33 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-30-2011, 04:06 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-31-2011, 12:25 AM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-31-2011, 02:10 AM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 05-31-2011, 02:41 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 05-31-2011, 02:59 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-31-2011, 06:36 AM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-31-2011, 09:02 AM
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[No subject] - by Disruptor - 05-31-2011, 11:11 PM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 06-06-2011, 12:20 AM
[No subject] - by Inquisitive Raven - 06-07-2011, 01:19 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 06-07-2011, 04:52 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 06-07-2011, 07:19 PM
[No subject] - by Valles - 06-08-2011, 12:43 AM
Re: Twisted Path - by aeroprime - 06-08-2011, 09:56 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 06-08-2011, 02:26 PM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 06-09-2011, 01:48 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 06-16-2011, 11:59 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-17-2011, 12:06 AM
[No subject] - by Disruptor - 06-17-2011, 12:58 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 06-17-2011, 02:07 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 07-04-2011, 09:21 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 07-05-2011, 02:44 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 07-05-2011, 02:53 PM
[No subject] - by Deadpan29 - 07-09-2011, 06:17 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 07-10-2011, 04:18 AM
[No subject] - by Dragonflight - 07-20-2011, 12:52 AM
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