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05-10-2011, 07:43 AM

Some minor spelling mistakes caught by Bob. It won't change the story any. The updates will be made shortly.
Edit: Changes made. Minor ones, usually either tenses, random misspellings, or (most often) using the same word or group of words too close to each other. I gotta watch that one...
Oh, in the story, a guy uses "zaibatsu" totally inappropriately. It's intentional. I don't know if people thought it was not expressed properly or not, but the intent is that it's being referred to by someone who doesn't know the lingo, and doesn't care to. If it doesn't work, let me know. Smile

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