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Dead Bang chapter 7

Necratoid
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05-24-2011, 07:17 PM

Well played Leon, well played. I love how the medic is mocking people with super powers and then randomly gains them through force of irony. I'm actually wondering if people are baffled how Leon pulled that off so well without wearing mirror shades... then at the end, I can see the rest of the people there torn between not laughing at the medic with super strength... or gaping at mirror shadeless Leon.
The one thing I'd change it making sure the glass is emphatically bullet proof glass... at least from the medics view point. Maybe I'm channeling a dose of ''Viewers are Idiots', but the internal freak out is better with that detail involved.

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