Thanks Bob. It's always a painful process, but one I'm thankful for nonetheless.
Definitely sounds like I need more work on writing in third person. I'm sorely tempted to go back to writing first person.
To achieve my goal it sounds like I've got to trim a lot... Though I'm happy to hear that the curry scene was that good.
Definitely sounds like I need more work on writing in third person. I'm sorely tempted to go back to writing first person.
To achieve my goal it sounds like I've got to trim a lot... Though I'm happy to hear that the curry scene was that good.