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[RFC][DSKSWDYHMS] Redoing Chapter 1...
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06-04-2011, 11:44 PM
You're welcome.

I must have missed the "why" of the POV shift somewhere, but don't beat yourself up over it. Honestly, neither one is better than the other -- they just have different strengths and weaknesses.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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[No subject] - by Dartz - 06-04-2011, 02:45 PM
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