Conflict one: Urd comes on too strong. Kinda geeky guy (even if his geekery is acceptably macho), getting flirted up by an utter sexbomb, is gonna be a little gunshy. "She's hot and talking to me.... when is the other shoe gonna drop?"
Conflict two: Viewpoint Joe's own flaws and "unreliable narrator."
Just a couple mundane sources I see already in the set-up.
''We don't just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat
them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.''
-- James Nicoll
Conflict two: Viewpoint Joe's own flaws and "unreliable narrator."
Just a couple mundane sources I see already in the set-up.
''We don't just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat
them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.''
-- James Nicoll