Err... Foxboy... he isn't flagrantly shipping pilot based couples of the happy go lucky variety.
As for the story itself, it may be my lack of a through archive crawl, but I don't think I've seen a mental voice type actually try to convince Rei that Gendo needs mental help this way before. Its subtle and of him and I like the paranoid about continuity checking going on with Isaiah. So far so good. The only thing i can think of that stands out as questionable is just formatting issues. Specifically, that the formatting is built for this forum. Not a bad thing, but posting this on say Pit of Voles would make this harder to read. Just something to think about should this be posted elsewhere.
Plot wise, this has no issues thus far... In future chapters I (or whoever) may find glitches in internal continuity, but so far so good.
As for the story itself, it may be my lack of a through archive crawl, but I don't think I've seen a mental voice type actually try to convince Rei that Gendo needs mental help this way before. Its subtle and of him and I like the paranoid about continuity checking going on with Isaiah. So far so good. The only thing i can think of that stands out as questionable is just formatting issues. Specifically, that the formatting is built for this forum. Not a bad thing, but posting this on say Pit of Voles would make this harder to read. Just something to think about should this be posted elsewhere.
Plot wise, this has no issues thus far... In future chapters I (or whoever) may find glitches in internal continuity, but so far so good.