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[RFC] For the Future
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 Quote:So...it's not completely terrible, then?Far from it! This is a very good start, up there with Dartz' and Foxboy's stories. As far as specific criticisms go, I might have a couple grammar/word choice nitpicks if I cared to go over the chapter with a fine-toothed comb; I think everyone else has already has hit the big points. All I can add is that I look forward to more! -- Bob --------- Then the horns kicked in... ...and my shoes began to squeak. |
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[RFC] For the Future - by Shay Guy - 07-21-2011, 04:48 AM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 07-21-2011, 05:57 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 07-21-2011, 07:21 AM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 07-21-2011, 02:22 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 07-21-2011, 04:55 PM
[No subject] - by Shay Guy - 07-22-2011, 06:19 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 07-22-2011, 07:14 AM
[No subject] - by Rod.H - 07-22-2011, 07:41 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 07-22-2011, 06:21 PM
[No subject] - by The Wanderer - 07-22-2011, 09:37 PM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 07-22-2011, 09:52 PM
[No subject] - by Shay Guy - 07-24-2011, 05:52 AM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 07-24-2011, 08:30 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 07-24-2011, 06:28 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 07-25-2011, 04:14 AM
[No subject] - by Shay Guy - 07-28-2011, 03:09 AM
[No subject] - by Shay Guy - 09-05-2011, 05:10 AM
[No subject] - by The Wanderer - 09-05-2011, 05:31 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 09-05-2011, 06:46 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-05-2011, 07:07 PM
[No subject] - by RomanFanboy - 09-06-2011, 12:44 AM
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