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Hnrgggg. Dialogue check needed.
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Also, don't forget the old standby of just reading it aloud and seeing if it flows naturally when you're talking through it. If it sounds stilted when you try to say it, it probably needs work. (Unless you're TRYING to write for a stuffy pedantic SOB...)
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Hnrgggg. Dialogue check needed. - by Wiregeek - 04-15-2012, 08:44 AM
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