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Mass Effect: Circular
Mass Effect: Circular
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Hey all.  Have a new project that I've been doing lately.  I started a Mass Effect Peggy Sue, which more or less starts from the end of ME3 and goes back to the beginning of ME1.  Which I have approached with my typical subtlety and tact.

Which is, none at all.

Which is right here.

I figured I might as well do a thread for comments, suggestions, critiquing and beta'ing, especially while SB is installing new forum software.

And post a teaser.





Quote:  Noveria.

“Faster! Run faster!”

Holding the shotgun in both hands, she runs through the door,
hearing the stomping of metal boots close behind her. Flickering and
chittering sounds surround her, glowing eyes under the faceplate
seeing the hint of motion before they drop in front of her.
Chittering, hissing with acid fangs, they stand on eight outstretched
legs to pounce.

Screaming, she swings the shotgun and fires, blasting one, swinging
the barrel into another as it leaps, sending the crittery crawly
thing flying and splattering into a wall. She turns, running
backwards as the roaring thing rears up on four legs, swinging out
its toothed dagger things of tentacles, hissing at her as it chases
with several of its friends.

A hand grabs the back of her hood and pulls her in, dropping to the
cold metal floor as the cock of the shotgun is followed with a blast,
and the door closes in front of the headless thing which was once one
of the monsters of this doomed lab.

“Gotcha,” Kal'Reegar says, extending a hand, “You okay,
Ma'am?”

Tali takes his hand, letting him help her up. Which is when five
more of the crawly small things drop around them.

Spiders! Spiders spiders spiders spiders!!!”

Each scream is punctuated by a blast from her shotgun, five
green puddles surrounding her. The two Quarians suck in breath,
leaning against each other.

“I hate spiders,” she says, “Especially evil homicidal
spiders.”

“Yeah,” Kal responds, “You and me both, Ma'am. Get the
elevator, I'll see if I can check in with Shepard.”

It's no secret that Tali'Zorah nar Rayya vas somethingsomething
hates elevators. It is no secret that she hates spiders.

So, the scream she lets off is to no one's surprise when the door
opens, and the elevator is revealed to be filled with Rachni.

But we're getting ahead of ourselves.
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Mass Effect: Circular - by GreggHL - 04-27-2012, 07:07 AM
[No subject] - by Matrix Dragon - 04-27-2012, 09:15 AM
[No subject] - by dark seraph - 04-27-2012, 09:23 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 04-27-2012, 11:35 AM
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[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 04-28-2012, 07:36 AM
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feedback - by Sirrocco - 04-28-2012, 06:33 PM
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[No subject] - by GreggHL - 05-02-2012, 05:26 AM
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[No subject] - by GreggHL - 05-02-2012, 08:07 AM
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[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 05-03-2012, 01:22 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-03-2012, 04:37 PM
[No subject] - by Matrix Dragon - 05-04-2012, 10:38 AM
[No subject] - by GreggHL - 05-04-2012, 10:55 AM
[No subject] - by Matrix Dragon - 05-04-2012, 12:14 PM
[No subject] - by GreggHL - 05-04-2012, 01:36 PM
[No subject] - by Niteflier - 05-04-2012, 10:00 PM
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[No subject] - by Necratoid - 05-05-2012, 05:09 AM
[No subject] - by Matrix Dragon - 05-05-2012, 08:10 AM
[No subject] - by GreggHL - 05-05-2012, 03:23 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Bad Moon - 05-06-2012, 04:27 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 05-06-2012, 07:25 AM
[No subject] - by Sirrocco - 05-28-2012, 08:43 AM
Really enjoying the fic - by murmur - 12-22-2012, 12:52 AM

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