I'm digging this. While you have upgraded Shepard (reasonable given the premise of the story), you are doing a good job maintaining tension by pitting her against an upgraded antagonist as well. So I wouldn't call it a Sue Fic.
I'm loving the Joker bits. And BA is right, your Tali is adorkable
I have only played ME 1 & 2, so I know I'm missing bits and pieces (some of the shorter bits go completely over my head). But that isn't stopping me from thoroughly enjoying this story.
Looking forward to more...
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy
I'm loving the Joker bits. And BA is right, your Tali is adorkable
I have only played ME 1 & 2, so I know I'm missing bits and pieces (some of the shorter bits go completely over my head). But that isn't stopping me from thoroughly enjoying this story.
Looking forward to more...
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy