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Mass Effect: Circular
 
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Necratoid Wrote:I'll second that on the whole shorter cut scenes thing... some of them are just inexplicable as their is no internal indication of who it involves.  There is an one line cuts that I think are Katsumi/John ones, but could be someone else entirely...
Quote:"I...well, I don't know how to say it. I just find you fascinating."
Its particularly weird and off... though you leave lots of random lines that I had to stop and wonder who said that.
On a side note... I'm pretty sure that shreddering a painting and reassembling it with nanotech should invalidate its value.  Though that could just be value dissidence on my part.

Duly noted, and will work on that.

And I think for Kasumi, it's less about the worth of the painting and more about whether she can a) bullshit it, and b) how much fun she has.

Also, here's an OC for your amusement.

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  The elevator comes to a halt, and the doors lower with a loud snap.
Two toed feet started marching across the walkway. Ash Williams
found her musing of how to paint a large squid onto the side of the
Normandy interrupted by a loud cough.

“Commander Shepard?”

Eyebrow raised, Ash turns on her heel. Either Skipper needs to get
more photo ops or this isn't someone who's human. Which is exactly
what it turns out to be. Clad in a navy, red trimmed encounter suit,
roughly as tall as her, faint pink glow from behind his mask, the
quarian in front of her gives off a sigh and scratches the back of
his head.

“Yeah, no,” Ash responds, “What do you want?”

“Kal'Ossen vas Citadel,” the quarian says, extending a hand,
“Admiralty board wanted me to help with the repair and resupply
since you've got Migrant Marines onboard.”

“Uh huh.”

“Y'know, set up a clean room, make sure you have Migrant Fleet
approved gruel,” the quarian responds, shrugging, “Everyone keeps
assuming we eat what the turians eat. Well, not exactly true. See,
here's the thing;”

He began explaining. She is, in all honesty, not sure what he was
explaining. Because it apparently had something to do with proteins,
and how proteins on one side don't always match up. And how too much
bacteria can get in bad places. And how turian proteins and quarian
proteins can, if one is not careful, create what he refers to as the
Gravy Train.

“...and then no one's laughing, because no one even wants to look
him in the eye. Got what I'm saying?”

She does. God help her, she does.

“Reminds me of this one time on Illium,” he continues, rubbing
the back of his helmet, “Saw a Krogan drink a liquified Turian.
Technically Krogans can eat anything, right? Well, no one left that
place looking pretty.”
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Mass Effect: Circular - by GreggHL - 04-27-2012, 07:07 AM
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Really enjoying the fic - by murmur - 12-22-2012, 12:52 AM

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