Well, I'm something of an inveterate lurker, so I don't know that you can count on much from me in the future, let alone anything useful. That said, I have enjoyed what I've seen from you in regards to DSKS, and it'd be sad if you completely abandoned it.
So! I read the bit you posted Thursday, and what stuck out most was that Zeke's cousin's attitude seesawed back and forth an awful lot. That can work, but it'll probably take some effort. Also, the angry grandfather/granduncle is hovering around the divide between character and caricature. Further, I know that folks can be utterly irrational about family, but why this guy still has any influence in his grandson's life may take some explaining.
So! I read the bit you posted Thursday, and what stuck out most was that Zeke's cousin's attitude seesawed back and forth an awful lot. That can work, but it'll probably take some effort. Also, the angry grandfather/granduncle is hovering around the divide between character and caricature. Further, I know that folks can be utterly irrational about family, but why this guy still has any influence in his grandson's life may take some explaining.