Harry Potter and the Deadly Heller

[Shepherd]

I loved the fic right up until the point where Harry, Ron, Hermione & Ginny make their way to Hogwarts right before the climactic battle. Then it all falls apart due to:

Spoiler

a hyper-competent Mary Sue version of the 'Scooby Gang' showing up and solving all of their problems in seconds.

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