Hmm, interesting, though I note it has the odd error I've seen in things converted to text in MSWord now and then where it gets most of the way through and then starts over from the beginning. Its a bit disconcerting to see a youma stunned, but not from the force of the disclaimer. It does so several times, getting a little further each time, also typical of this error.
As for the fic itself... well, it's not bad, but I really think Ami could have soloed a little longer by applying creativity and planning
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
As for the fic itself... well, it's not bad, but I really think Ami could have soloed a little longer by applying creativity and planning
--
"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows