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Fanfic: Harry Potter and A Memory of Light
murmur
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Thanks for the reply
#29
02-12-2013, 02:20 AM
As is the case for most of the Harry Potter books--with the exception to the first chapter in the last few--the story is a pretty close third person personal POV from Harry's perspective.  I guess I should change that first sentence you mentioned, as it is very unlike the rest and breaks up the narrative flow.

As for the Dumbledore and McGonnagal infodumps . . . this chapter was where I put a lot of my infodumps.  I always hated that fanfics just expected you to know everything about everyone, without bothering to introduce characters and settings and ideas.  I should go back and make the information come out more naturally . . . but I wanted to get this chapter out.  

Also, will be on the lookout for tense slippages.  Hate those.  Hate, hate those.

Thanks for the read!

-Murmur
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Fanfic: Harry Potter and A Memory of Light - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 02:01 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 01-31-2013, 03:05 AM
Chapter 1 Part 1 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:10 AM
Chapter 1 Part 2 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:12 AM
[No subject] - by DHBirr - 01-31-2013, 03:15 AM
Chapter 1 Part 3 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:15 AM
Chapter 1 Part 4 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:18 AM
Chapter 1 Part 5 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:20 AM
Chapter 1 Part 6 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:22 AM
Chapter 1 Part 7 - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:23 AM
[No subject] - by murmur - 01-31-2013, 03:27 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 01-31-2013, 08:14 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 01-31-2013, 09:10 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 01-31-2013, 10:55 PM
Super-Harry AKA Boring Invincible Hero Harry. - by murmur - 02-01-2013, 05:59 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 02-01-2013, 07:58 AM
Yeah, still . . . - by murmur - 02-01-2013, 08:53 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 02-01-2013, 08:56 AM
I did consider it - by murmur - 02-06-2013, 07:50 AM
Update coming soon - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 03:41 AM
Chapter 2 part 1 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:12 AM
chapter 2 part 2 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:17 AM
chapter 2 part 3 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:19 AM
chapter 2 part 4 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:20 AM
chapter 2 part 5 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:23 AM
chapter 2 part 6 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:26 AM
chapter 2 part 7 - by murmur - 02-08-2013, 05:30 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 02-08-2013, 05:34 AM
Thanks for the reply - by murmur - 02-12-2013, 02:20 AM
[No subject] - by Silverex - 02-12-2013, 03:27 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 02-15-2013, 03:20 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 02-15-2013, 03:24 AM
Thanks for the encouragement - by murmur - 02-19-2013, 04:37 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 02-19-2013, 06:48 AM
Look up the entry on "non-beings" - by murmur - 02-19-2013, 07:39 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 02-19-2013, 08:01 AM
[No subject] - by ClassicDrogn - 02-19-2013, 06:50 PM

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