Thanks for the corrections both of you (although I prefer nor to neither in this case CD).
When I first encountered Cornelia it took me a while not to substitute Cordelia (as in Chase). While they're not quite the same, there are some notable similarities.
Given how the rest of the story is shaping up, I think that the last scene might actually work best in the second part than the first. And yes there are quite a few other problems that are hovering around impatiently waiting to be unleashed on the MC.
D for Drakensis
You're only young once, but immaturity is forever.
When I first encountered Cornelia it took me a while not to substitute Cordelia (as in Chase). While they're not quite the same, there are some notable similarities.
Given how the rest of the story is shaping up, I think that the last scene might actually work best in the second part than the first. And yes there are quite a few other problems that are hovering around impatiently waiting to be unleashed on the MC.
D for Drakensis
You're only young once, but immaturity is forever.