40
Cornelia sure is taking a leadership position. As expected of a Patrician Gens.
Kidding.
Also, I'm getting the impression that our girl might be a bit starved of human contact.
Will probably keeps the old keys because she misses the old apartment.
I couldn't help but laugh at the look on her face. I'm pretty sure a frog the size of Will's dormouse would be the biggest frog in the world. "...how do you feel about dormice?"
American Bullfrog, for one.
Will wasn't in the bathroom. I was checking the kitchen again, to see if it looked like she'd had lunch here when I spotted a blinking light on the ansafone. Will couldn't have left a message on it in case Mom heard it, but perhaps it would explain why she had left?
Is ansafone some usage I wouldn't know, being poor, ignorant, and American?
"It's me honey," Mom's voice came from the machine when I pressed the button. "I'll be late today, but I'll bring something ready for dinner. Make sure you keep your cell phone on so I can get hold of you iof anything comes up."
if rather than iof
Vera can mean, truths, youths, or true in Latin
41
"Aw, come on, Taranee!" Irma chirped. "No one would want to spend all day stuck at home with nothing to do but homework and chores. It would be like Hay Lin not writing on her hands anymore."
I looked over and the Guardian of Air was indeed scribbling something onto the palm of her hand with a felt-tip. "I can't imagine how terrible it would be to be cooped up all day like that," I snapped at the brunnette. "Oh wait, I don't have to imagine it."
Shades of Toph, Tough.
Also, Yuku spellcheck says Brunette.
Tough, or Toughness is this round's naming suggestion for her.
Also, I'm more and more feeling that she is isolated, and, well, the phrase Vathara uses is touch starved. I really think the situation is not good for her.
Hay Lin seems to have a better aptitude for intelligence.
"But Cedric is Phobos' lieutenant," I objected. "Why would they do that if they hate him?" I sipped from my own cup and hid a fluinch. Wow, tea was served hot. I'd prefer something cooler to drink.
Flinch
Insert joke about how it makes sense for her to be the poison detector. Randolph maybe can guess about some of this.
"Well it can't be the gymnasium," pointed out Hay Lin. "Will closed that one."
This isn't one of the ancient greek naked places? This is the modern usage, right?
43
She is starting to develop into a bibliophile, it seems.
Okay, not evil, it looks like. Something else. He seems to be fairly decent in the normal state also.
That said, I really am concerned about that situation, if it hasn't been resolved.
And you are doing an /excellent/ job with the emotional side of this.
45
He nodded. "Alight. Now I've done some checking and I think I know what was happened. I should have explained things better to you. I'm your teacher and I should have been more responsible. I'm very sorry."
Alright
I'm really concerned about this situation again.
Supposedly, there are broad tendencies that let one tell from where they look whether they are remembering, or composing.
General thoughts
I've finding the emotional picture fairly strong.
It kinda of feels like I'm finding fewer typographical issues per post. I'm unsure if this is a change in wordcount, typographical error frequency, or if it is something on my end, like the strength of my emotional reaction, or maybe I somehow didn't sleep well enough last night.
I'm deeply worried about her homelife. Especially Collins, but Will and her Mother are also of concern.
I'm unsure about Collins. On the one hand, he seems to be trying to do right. On the other hand, he seems to be aware of the changes, and to be covering them up, rather than trying to minimize harm.
This continues to be very well executed, and I'm extremely interested in seeing it continue.
She shouldn't be doing extra credit work for Will. That just hurts Will in the long run.
Cornelia sure is taking a leadership position. As expected of a Patrician Gens.
Kidding. Also, I'm getting the impression that our girl might be a bit starved of human contact.
Will probably keeps the old keys because she misses the old apartment.
I couldn't help but laugh at the look on her face. I'm pretty sure a frog the size of Will's dormouse would be the biggest frog in the world. "...how do you feel about dormice?"
American Bullfrog, for one.
Will wasn't in the bathroom. I was checking the kitchen again, to see if it looked like she'd had lunch here when I spotted a blinking light on the ansafone. Will couldn't have left a message on it in case Mom heard it, but perhaps it would explain why she had left?
Is ansafone some usage I wouldn't know, being poor, ignorant, and American?
"It's me honey," Mom's voice came from the machine when I pressed the button. "I'll be late today, but I'll bring something ready for dinner. Make sure you keep your cell phone on so I can get hold of you iof anything comes up."
if rather than iof
Vera can mean, truths, youths, or true in Latin
41
"Aw, come on, Taranee!" Irma chirped. "No one would want to spend all day stuck at home with nothing to do but homework and chores. It would be like Hay Lin not writing on her hands anymore."
I looked over and the Guardian of Air was indeed scribbling something onto the palm of her hand with a felt-tip. "I can't imagine how terrible it would be to be cooped up all day like that," I snapped at the brunnette. "Oh wait, I don't have to imagine it."
Shades of Toph, Tough.
Also, Yuku spellcheck says Brunette.
Tough, or Toughness is this round's naming suggestion for her.
Also, I'm more and more feeling that she is isolated, and, well, the phrase Vathara uses is touch starved. I really think the situation is not good for her.
Hay Lin seems to have a better aptitude for intelligence.
"But Cedric is Phobos' lieutenant," I objected. "Why would they do that if they hate him?" I sipped from my own cup and hid a fluinch. Wow, tea was served hot. I'd prefer something cooler to drink.
Flinch
Insert joke about how it makes sense for her to be the poison detector. Randolph maybe can guess about some of this.
"Well it can't be the gymnasium," pointed out Hay Lin. "Will closed that one."
This isn't one of the ancient greek naked places? This is the modern usage, right?
43
She is starting to develop into a bibliophile, it seems.
Okay, not evil, it looks like. Something else. He seems to be fairly decent in the normal state also.
That said, I really am concerned about that situation, if it hasn't been resolved.
And you are doing an /excellent/ job with the emotional side of this.
45
He nodded. "Alight. Now I've done some checking and I think I know what was happened. I should have explained things better to you. I'm your teacher and I should have been more responsible. I'm very sorry."
Alright
I'm really concerned about this situation again.
Supposedly, there are broad tendencies that let one tell from where they look whether they are remembering, or composing.
General thoughts
I've finding the emotional picture fairly strong.
It kinda of feels like I'm finding fewer typographical issues per post. I'm unsure if this is a change in wordcount, typographical error frequency, or if it is something on my end, like the strength of my emotional reaction, or maybe I somehow didn't sleep well enough last night.
I'm deeply worried about her homelife. Especially Collins, but Will and her Mother are also of concern.
I'm unsure about Collins. On the one hand, he seems to be trying to do right. On the other hand, he seems to be aware of the changes, and to be covering them up, rather than trying to minimize harm.
This continues to be very well executed, and I'm extremely interested in seeing it continue.
She shouldn't be doing extra credit work for Will. That just hurts Will in the long run.