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Fanfic: Will's Secret
 
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Needs a bit more work I think. And I'm not sure that it works with 'keeping the secret' from the readers (I think it's pretty obvious), so a rewrite might be in order.
D for Drakensis

You're only young once, but immaturity is forever.
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Fanfic: Will's Secret - by drakensis - 03-08-2013, 01:25 PM
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