Thank you about your comments.
I had missed the first error, and thought I had completely fixed the second. I'll have to work on that.
Rin has had too many shocks in too little a time to make that realization. Don't worry she'll be back in force in the next part. And no, Saber's not at full power, none of the servants are. That the main reason why Rider hasn't used her noble phantasm again, and why only archer tried bringing out his own.
As for saber, she's in a different situation than in the original story. With the number of servants shirou has, she feels a little less necessary and is trying to prove herself useful. That combined with her natural knightly loyalty and her tendency not to lie makes it so she answers.
Finally, she does see Rin as an opponent. That's why she waited on her master's approval before talking.
I do realize however that I haven't made the last point clear enough. I'll revise the story with that in mind.
Many thanks,
Seraviel
-People may die, but ideas are forever. Je suis Charlie.
I had missed the first error, and thought I had completely fixed the second. I'll have to work on that.
Rin has had too many shocks in too little a time to make that realization. Don't worry she'll be back in force in the next part. And no, Saber's not at full power, none of the servants are. That the main reason why Rider hasn't used her noble phantasm again, and why only archer tried bringing out his own.
As for saber, she's in a different situation than in the original story. With the number of servants shirou has, she feels a little less necessary and is trying to prove herself useful. That combined with her natural knightly loyalty and her tendency not to lie makes it so she answers.
Finally, she does see Rin as an opponent. That's why she waited on her master's approval before talking.
I do realize however that I haven't made the last point clear enough. I'll revise the story with that in mind.
Many thanks,
Seraviel
-People may die, but ideas are forever. Je suis Charlie.