Bluemage Wrote:I'm just about ready to start rewriting/reposting to SB, and I'm considering whether I should keep posting here. What do people think?Sure, keep posting here. We're your pre-readers...
Bluemage Wrote:As for the effects of my spells...I wouldn't suggest doing a Dimensional Transfer to a point in the air - your spells appear to like having a ground effect.
Every attack spell I tried caused the target to slam into the ground with great force. The higher the divergence, the greater the effect. Actual direct damage, of the sort the spell was meant to cause, decreases proportionately.
Defensive spells redirect whatever hits them into the ground, in precisely the same way attack spells redirect the things they hit. The statistics- mana consumption, velocity, divergence levels- are exactly the same for both.
The only utility spell I've learned at this point is Dimensional Transfer. Strangely enough, it wouldn't misfire, regardless of what I did, or how much my mana changed when I cast it. In fact, whenever my divergence level went up, DT would become quicker and more efficient.
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