First, it's not a briefing. It's meant to be sort of a 'remember why this mission is so important' bit. How can I improve that?
Second, the dam hasn't been 'sploded yet. The intent was that he looked the place over, came up with the dam idea... and then went 'oh, crap. I need to change plans. That's going to suck.'
Third, on reflection, I really need to rewrite that. It really isn't smooth at all. Thanks!
My Unitarian Jihad Name is: Brother Atom Bomb of Courteous Debate. Get yours.
I've been writing a bit.
Second, the dam hasn't been 'sploded yet. The intent was that he looked the place over, came up with the dam idea... and then went 'oh, crap. I need to change plans. That's going to suck.'
Third, on reflection, I really need to rewrite that. It really isn't smooth at all. Thanks!
My Unitarian Jihad Name is: Brother Atom Bomb of Courteous Debate. Get yours.
I've been writing a bit.