Agreed. She sounds at least 14 and maybe 18. Then again, most of the students at Hogwarts sound the same. (And why do F&G call her
"mate" when she's female? Isn't that male-only?)
And don't get me going on Ethan -- a little of that personality would have been great. A lot... starrts getting grating.
Didn't stop me from enjoying the story, though.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
"mate" when she's female? Isn't that male-only?)
And don't get me going on Ethan -- a little of that personality would have been great. A lot... starrts getting grating.
Didn't stop me from enjoying the story, though.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.