BA has not had a chance to look at this yet, but this is what I have changed. I hope he will edit it soon.
It turned out that Tifa is put into a Coma for a week from what happens at this event in canon, I can not ignore that so I am going to change it.
Edit: Changed the age a little for Yuffie, so things make sense.
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Cloud was clutching her hand so hard that it should have been painful...why wasn't it painful?
"Tifa! Stay awake! I'm going to go get help!"
She wasn’t strong enough - even with the adrenaline rush - to lift herself upright. Help for what? She wondered.
Her mind wondered, trying to remember what happened. She ran from home to be alone, but her friends followed, so did Cloud.
Then...she fell. Cloud fell too.
Her mother...she died. She isn't going to be at Mt. Nebel, she would have stopped this from happening. She started to cry, and she heard Cloud come back.
'Tifa! Drink this, it's a Hi-Potion, it'll help you." She opened her mouth, and could gently poured a little into her mouth and she swallowed. She felt a little better, but was crying silently the whole time. She was able to move around a little, and sat upright with Cloud's help. She noticed that her leg was pointing the wrong direction, and wondered why. She clutched onto his shirt to stay upright, and suddenly was feeling sleepy...
“You alright?” Cloud asked her, but all she could do was cry into his muttering about her mother.
Cloud felt afraid, he felt something was wrong, but Tifa didn’t notice. If she knew that Cloud was thinking then she probably would have felt hopeless. ‘We’re trapped, and the only thing we can do is wait for help…I don’t know what to do about this whole thing let alone a girl crying on me! What do I DO!' He eventually just hugged her, praying for help.
Then Tifa just stopped crying, and Cloud looked at her, and almost screamed in panic. Her eyes were closed, and she was getting cold, he couldn't feel her heartbeat on his chest anymore.
He felt a shiver go up his spine.
“HEY! Whatcha’ doing down there?!” A voice asked from above.
“Were stuck!” Cloud yelled looking up with hope, and then felt his heart sink. It was another kid.
"You ok!?" She asked in concern.
"NO! Help us! PLEASE!" He yelled, holding Tifa tightly. He saw her look of realization and started digging though a bag at her side.
"Alright! Catch this and put it on her chest!" She tossed something red at him, and he caught it, barely. It was a dull red, shaped like a feather and felt like a feather, but it was heavy. Before he could ask about it, the little girl answered his question.
"It's a Phoenix down! Is she stiff?!"
"No!" Cloud yelled back, touching Tifa's arm.
"Put it on her! Quick!" Cloud laid her down, and pressed the Phoenix Down onto Tifa, who gasped a moment later.
"What happened?" Tifa asked, and Cloud was now the person crying.
It all came back to Tifa, and she moved to hug cloud, but couldn't move much.
"Hold on! I'll be right down!" Tifa looked up with hope, which was promptly destroyed, turning into annoyance.Why couldn’t an adult find them?
It was a little girl, no bigger than Tifa herself. What was SHE going to do to get them out? Other than go get her daddy... Tifa didn’t want that, but she knew it was going to happen anyway the moment her friends ran off at the first sign of trouble. To top it all off, they would likely blame Cloud since they didn’t like him to begin with.
“Here’s a rope! Can ya climb?!” She yelled, and both Tifa and cloud nodded their heads.
“Alright, I tied it to this REALLY big rock! Here ya go!” She yelled down to them, throwing them the rope.
Cloud grabbed it, and the little girl started to climb down. When she reached the bottom, she ran over to Tifa, and pulled out a green orb.
"Ok...Cure." Tifa was covered in white sparkles, and then her face contorted into the image of pain.
"AhHH!!" She screamed. Cloud looked on in horror, and looked to the little girl with the Orb.
"CURE! CURE! CURE!" The little girl started yelling, casting those spells. Her screams went down, and she started to cry a little. Her leg was no longer pointing the wrong direction at least. The little girl sat down, panting.
"It hurts..." Tifa moaned, and Cloud looked at the little girl, and grabbed the Green Orb, then knowledge flooded into his head, this was how he needed to heal Tifa.
"Cure!" He said, and the white sparkles came back, and Tifa started to look less pale. Cloud looked on with hope, Tifa didn't die and was healing.
Encouraged, he cast the spell twice more and Tifa stopped crying. "It...doesn't hurt anymore." She said, and slowly got back up, Cloud helping her up.
"Ok! Now that that is done, let's get back up there!" The little girl announced, tossing a empty blue bottle to the side.
Cloud nodded his head, and grabbed the rope, and walked over to Tifa.
“Whaa…what are you doing?”
“Putting it around you, so when I get up there I can lift you up.” Cloud answered, and started to climb, not noticing Tifa’s blush.
“I can climb it myself!” She yelled at Cloud, but he was already half way up the rope. The little girl started climbing, and was bugging Cloud to move faster.
She pouted, but decided not to untie it. Instead, she tugged on it to make sure it was fastened securely, and began to climb.
She only managed to get a quarter of the way up before calling for help.
Cloud was already at the top, and the little girl that saved them was climbing up when they heard her crying out. He looked back and found that Tifa was struggling futilely.
“Ok, let’s pull her up!” he told the girl behind him. The strange girl nodded as and started to pull together.
“Climb girl, climb!” The girl behind him called out as they pulled.
Tifa huffed, and tried to climb the rope again.
“Not the rope! The wall! Grab the wall and start climbing!” the girl hollered. Tifa realized her mistake and began climbing the wall instead. With Cloud and the strange girl pulling from above, Tifa found she was going up faster than Cloud managed on his own.
Once she got up the wall, Cloud and the girl were already panting from exertion, while Tifa was just a little sore where the rope was.
“Your not a feather.” the girl grumped and Cloud laughed.
Tifa blushed, and retorted, “Well you’re a little small for a eight year old!”
“I'm seven year's old missy, as of last week! And if I didn’t come around you would have been stuck down there forever!”
Cloud wisely stayed out of it, but was surprised when Tifa just huffed and thanked her for helping them.
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Cloud having a Hi-potion is not out of the question, even finding one near by isn't out of the question.
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Veni, vidi, vici. [I came, I saw, I conquered
Quote from Julius Caesar
It turned out that Tifa is put into a Coma for a week from what happens at this event in canon, I can not ignore that so I am going to change it.
Edit: Changed the age a little for Yuffie, so things make sense.
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Cloud was clutching her hand so hard that it should have been painful...why wasn't it painful?
"Tifa! Stay awake! I'm going to go get help!"
She wasn’t strong enough - even with the adrenaline rush - to lift herself upright. Help for what? She wondered.
Her mind wondered, trying to remember what happened. She ran from home to be alone, but her friends followed, so did Cloud.
Then...she fell. Cloud fell too.
Her mother...she died. She isn't going to be at Mt. Nebel, she would have stopped this from happening. She started to cry, and she heard Cloud come back.
'Tifa! Drink this, it's a Hi-Potion, it'll help you." She opened her mouth, and could gently poured a little into her mouth and she swallowed. She felt a little better, but was crying silently the whole time. She was able to move around a little, and sat upright with Cloud's help. She noticed that her leg was pointing the wrong direction, and wondered why. She clutched onto his shirt to stay upright, and suddenly was feeling sleepy...
“You alright?” Cloud asked her, but all she could do was cry into his muttering about her mother.
Cloud felt afraid, he felt something was wrong, but Tifa didn’t notice. If she knew that Cloud was thinking then she probably would have felt hopeless. ‘We’re trapped, and the only thing we can do is wait for help…I don’t know what to do about this whole thing let alone a girl crying on me! What do I DO!' He eventually just hugged her, praying for help.
Then Tifa just stopped crying, and Cloud looked at her, and almost screamed in panic. Her eyes were closed, and she was getting cold, he couldn't feel her heartbeat on his chest anymore.
He felt a shiver go up his spine.
“HEY! Whatcha’ doing down there?!” A voice asked from above.
“Were stuck!” Cloud yelled looking up with hope, and then felt his heart sink. It was another kid.
"You ok!?" She asked in concern.
"NO! Help us! PLEASE!" He yelled, holding Tifa tightly. He saw her look of realization and started digging though a bag at her side.
"Alright! Catch this and put it on her chest!" She tossed something red at him, and he caught it, barely. It was a dull red, shaped like a feather and felt like a feather, but it was heavy. Before he could ask about it, the little girl answered his question.
"It's a Phoenix down! Is she stiff?!"
"No!" Cloud yelled back, touching Tifa's arm.
"Put it on her! Quick!" Cloud laid her down, and pressed the Phoenix Down onto Tifa, who gasped a moment later.
"What happened?" Tifa asked, and Cloud was now the person crying.
It all came back to Tifa, and she moved to hug cloud, but couldn't move much.
"Hold on! I'll be right down!" Tifa looked up with hope, which was promptly destroyed, turning into annoyance.Why couldn’t an adult find them?
It was a little girl, no bigger than Tifa herself. What was SHE going to do to get them out? Other than go get her daddy... Tifa didn’t want that, but she knew it was going to happen anyway the moment her friends ran off at the first sign of trouble. To top it all off, they would likely blame Cloud since they didn’t like him to begin with.
“Here’s a rope! Can ya climb?!” She yelled, and both Tifa and cloud nodded their heads.
“Alright, I tied it to this REALLY big rock! Here ya go!” She yelled down to them, throwing them the rope.
Cloud grabbed it, and the little girl started to climb down. When she reached the bottom, she ran over to Tifa, and pulled out a green orb.
"Ok...Cure." Tifa was covered in white sparkles, and then her face contorted into the image of pain.
"AhHH!!" She screamed. Cloud looked on in horror, and looked to the little girl with the Orb.
"CURE! CURE! CURE!" The little girl started yelling, casting those spells. Her screams went down, and she started to cry a little. Her leg was no longer pointing the wrong direction at least. The little girl sat down, panting.
"It hurts..." Tifa moaned, and Cloud looked at the little girl, and grabbed the Green Orb, then knowledge flooded into his head, this was how he needed to heal Tifa.
"Cure!" He said, and the white sparkles came back, and Tifa started to look less pale. Cloud looked on with hope, Tifa didn't die and was healing.
Encouraged, he cast the spell twice more and Tifa stopped crying. "It...doesn't hurt anymore." She said, and slowly got back up, Cloud helping her up.
"Ok! Now that that is done, let's get back up there!" The little girl announced, tossing a empty blue bottle to the side.
Cloud nodded his head, and grabbed the rope, and walked over to Tifa.
“Whaa…what are you doing?”
“Putting it around you, so when I get up there I can lift you up.” Cloud answered, and started to climb, not noticing Tifa’s blush.
“I can climb it myself!” She yelled at Cloud, but he was already half way up the rope. The little girl started climbing, and was bugging Cloud to move faster.
She pouted, but decided not to untie it. Instead, she tugged on it to make sure it was fastened securely, and began to climb.
She only managed to get a quarter of the way up before calling for help.
Cloud was already at the top, and the little girl that saved them was climbing up when they heard her crying out. He looked back and found that Tifa was struggling futilely.
“Ok, let’s pull her up!” he told the girl behind him. The strange girl nodded as and started to pull together.
“Climb girl, climb!” The girl behind him called out as they pulled.
Tifa huffed, and tried to climb the rope again.
“Not the rope! The wall! Grab the wall and start climbing!” the girl hollered. Tifa realized her mistake and began climbing the wall instead. With Cloud and the strange girl pulling from above, Tifa found she was going up faster than Cloud managed on his own.
Once she got up the wall, Cloud and the girl were already panting from exertion, while Tifa was just a little sore where the rope was.
“Your not a feather.” the girl grumped and Cloud laughed.
Tifa blushed, and retorted, “Well you’re a little small for a eight year old!”
“I'm seven year's old missy, as of last week! And if I didn’t come around you would have been stuck down there forever!”
Cloud wisely stayed out of it, but was surprised when Tifa just huffed and thanked her for helping them.
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Cloud having a Hi-potion is not out of the question, even finding one near by isn't out of the question.
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Veni, vidi, vici. [I came, I saw, I conquered
Quote from Julius Caesar