Quote:ClassicDrogn wrote:Ah, I forgot to explain this.
I thought she wasn't feeling too bad to begin with? Just kind of
disoriented - sure, it's because she's in shock and not really feeling
the injuries, but "a little stronger" or "a little more focused" might
work better, as well as wondering why she's crying when she doesn't feel
too hurt, or else mention that she's crying about her mother being
gone. Replacing at least one "She" with her name would also be good, I
think.
Because Cloud used a hi-potion in this timeline, and not in the original, this makes things much worse for Tifa.
Partial healing of the sort of trama that put's you into a coma for three days could kill you, in this case the Hi-potion healed a good deal of the damage, (And even then, a Hi-potion would not fix a broken leg, and would have dealt with the more serious damage to her like the broken spine.) but did not fix the concussion she would have that would put her into a coma that bad.
In fact, Tifa is lucky she didn't start vomiting from her concussion.
She wasn't able to feel her injuries do to damage to nervous system from the prviously broken spine, she manages to feel better because she can still feel from the shoulders up, and she was only a little bruised in that area.
I guess I should explain in more detail in story a little more, sorry about that.
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