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[RFC][SI][Multi-Xover]Being You is Suffering

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03-16-2014, 09:51 AM

A subjective issue, but an issue none the less in my eyes:

All in all, this story has individual chapters that are very well written but the overall flow of the story is such that Mr. Grim seems to have gone from a random schmuck dropped on the Masaki household to beloved family member and central figure way too fast for my suspention of disbelief to keep up.
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No, I don't believe the world has gone mad. In order for it to go mad it would need to have been sane at some point.

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[RFC][SI][Multi-Xover]Being You is Suffering - by Black Aeronaut - 02-02-2014, 04:42 PM

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