Quote:I would use this for a point where Garrick is pushed into giving up on being human in order to protect people that he cares about. Unfortunately, this is much to their own horror because they've always known that Garrick would never want to give up on being human.My own SI story based on a similar pattern touches a similar cord (Not about giving up being human, though). There comes one point where any person is pushed beyond their limits, and reaches for all they can have. For Garrick, this seems about his humanity (in the physical sense), while in my character's case it is about his restraint (his humanity in the mental sense).
"You've made a mistake. You have pushed me too far, and now I know I'm far stronger than I ever thought... I was never supposed to be like this. I never even wanted this. For this... I am going to punish you."
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