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[RFC][SI][Multi-Xover]Being You is Suffering

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#201

04-22-2014, 03:37 AM

I don't know enough about her to say much either way - I did spot a little gremlin chewing on your phrasing, though.

Quote:expend an effort (albeit a small on) to

My suggestion to replace it would be "some" or "a bit of effort (however small)"

At the very least, you need to add the silent "e" to "one."
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[RFC][SI][Multi-Xover]Being You is Suffering - by Black Aeronaut - 02-02-2014, 04:42 PM

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