Sorry, I was busy while you were asking for specific reactions - the shootin' iron as revised with more maths sounds nifty to me, and like Bluemage said, if any opponent doesn't know they've been kissed after taking eight shots from that, they are not someone you should be engaging with small arms fire to begin with.
On to the longer part:
Heh, I always have to respect a man who knows the importance of a shoulder loli.
http://gairon.deviantart.com/art/BHTSY-5-09-324017481
Bedtime story = much d'awwwsome
"that meant more time training Yuki." this might be better as "that meant more time to train Yuki first."
No complaints about the rest, just lots of good stuff there and it moves the plot forward nicely.
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
On to the longer part:
Heh, I always have to respect a man who knows the importance of a shoulder loli.
http://gairon.deviantart.com/art/BHTSY-5-09-324017481
Bedtime story = much d'awwwsome
"that meant more time training Yuki." this might be better as "that meant more time to train Yuki first."
No complaints about the rest, just lots of good stuff there and it moves the plot forward nicely.
--
"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows