Quote:because my father told me how nasty and mean other boys could be.I'd drop the "other" in this, because it's got no proper antecedent, and it implies that her father knew about Garrick in advance in order to exclude him from the nasty and mean boys.
There was something else, but I can't remember or find it now.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.